[quote=Sep]
I'm still seeing issues. I'll point them out to you in fairness but at this point I'm saying no to this entire character.1- So first he "Saw" a vessel orbiting Mandalore? Where did it come from? Why didn't the Imperials go for it? If it was a trap how comes it wasn't obvious to Shysa that it was a trap?2-The Imperial Occupation on Mandalore never really ended until after the Emperors death. I mean if the Mandalorians kicked off the Garrison with as valuable resource as Mandalorian Iron available 3- Why does Shysa want you to join the Rebellion?4- Why does Shysa want you to destroy the Rebellion?5- Why would rebels recruit so openly?6- Why would they trust you on sight?7- Why would they then lead you to one of their main bases without any proof that you weren't an Imperial(And for reference Yavin IV wasn't used until nearer 0ABY)8- Why did you then decide not to destroy the rebellion?There shouldn't be any real questions after reading a CS, not ones with such gaps. I mean I can maybe give you 3/4 away to being a secret.
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1:the Ship is a Vessel from the mandalorian wars so and it was left orbiting. As for why they didnt know the ship was a trap (cue admiral ackbar) its again an ancient vessel. i guess they didnt know the Empire was told about it.
2. they never kicked them off in my backstory there still fighting
3: the rebellion would be a powerful ally to the mandalorians.
4 never said she wanted to destroy them (just noticed i forgot to put the empire at the end of that sentence)
5 how else would they get recruits
6 they didnt they told me to state my buisness and a password
7 how else would they get recruits
8 See Q4