[quote=Delta44]
Alright, edited in a few things. For simplicities sake I'll write what I did here: I added she was born in Cherryville, and is returning there to eliminate a certain "loose end". She now has an AR-15 Assault Rifle and her M.1911 as weapons, and I've excluded that last part in the skills section. If you want, I could probably list a few disadvantages to the character.
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Sounds better, and yes a few disadvantages will paint her as a good character.

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