[quote]@Sixsmith So far I really, really like you character! And you're not rambling too much. Also spoiler, I guess: our first antagonist is going to be a priest, so I'm going to love to see how things go down between your character and him. But anyway, about the rambling, like Barks wrote, it gives everyone something to read! This is my first attempt at a High Casual rp where I haven't written the most elaborate of biographies (though I've been steadily expanding on personalities in a word document and should probably cut down, or at least resist the urge to change the present ones, considering the amount of characters I have; people might get bored with them LOL). And I willingly admit I've been prone to rambling before sooo...this is a change. And I suck at biographies; that's part of the reason I ramble. I used to make my characters extremely average and ramble to fill in bio space. So I'm going in extremely loose and hoping to build upon my characters. And really focus on in character writing this time around, rather than OC information, which I think I suck ass at; even worse it's been like a 100 hundred years since I participated in a High Cas/Advanced rp and I'm rusty. Like REALLY rusty. And that's bad...(supposed English Major here). But either way, before [i]I[/i] begin OC rambling, great character. Jack has a copy of [i]To Kill a Mockingbird[/i] on his person as well, so maybe they can bond over it. I eagerly await your writing sample while I postpone my own due to homework and laziness. Also worth noting, I've changed Selina to be a second generation biracial, as well as of Indo-Caribbean descent rather than South Asian. And I've seen that McHaggis has added Malik's sister. We're probably going to have a big group of characters, what with my 1 billion ones, and already some of you have applied with more than one or are planning to. So I think that second group will have to hold off for quite a while, until I'm confident I can handle that many rpers + that many characters. But, ANYWAY, I'm off to pretend to write a thesis and probably work on my writing sample.[/quote] That's what I was [i]supposed[/i] to have posted yesterday, but then things went crazy LOL. Oh and guess what I still haven't done....*cough*writingsample*cough*. I've been reliving high school literature and been badly preoccupied with reading [i]To Kill a Mockingbird[/i] again. And soon I'm going to pick up [i]Beowful[/i] which I'm not looking forward too...