Masaki: I was under the impression you wanted to do something new. :P

Res: Things look fine with your character, except how she got to Iwagakure. Iwa and Kiri are constantly battling, a Kiri shinobi wouldn't exactly be treated well by the general populus of the village. Maybe you should try and make her a deserter from Kiri, like she and her father are running from Kiri, and found refuge in Iwagakure. Or something along those lines.