[quote=BingTheWing]
 Ajax Garrison	 38 Male The Othean Royal
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Bing..... I'm sorry but the main problem I see with your CS is the Da-Hyunin pirates' attack:
1. They would NEVER, EVER go as far inland as to reach Othea. (Da-Hyuni) Pirates are in their element as close to the sea as they can be, and they'll only perform lightning attacks on coastal cities or towns. So if Ajax was from an Oragossi coastal town, it would make sense. Just not when he's from any Othean town. The following are just minor concerns;
2. A crew would exist of more than 8 pirates if they're planning on ambushing a town.... Also, once they had chased out the inhabitants, they'd gather all valuables they could find and get out of there a.s.a.p. They wouldn't bother searching for the survivors and instead get their asses back to the open sea before some sort of backup could arrive.
3. Seeing how the "dirty tactic" of killing enemies in their sleep, is a very Da-Hyuni thing to do, they'll most likely have taken counter measures against such a thing!
(These points could quite easily be helped by saying that they were bandits and not Da-Hyuni pirates).

Other than these points, I don't really see anything wrong with it. I'm sure Ellri will come up with some points, but it's great to see that you came up with a concept! ^_^