Malikoy: Jagrid as a character looks fine to me, the only thing that gets me is the nation of choosing. Spartan's in general were of greek decent and although Alexander never conquered Sparta, they were very close and still part of his lands. and with that being said I believe that if there were to be a Spartan culture in this world it would develop in Anavio which is similar to its original home. Where as the Caudium is more based around Rome which was an entirely different Culture in which a city state like Sparta wouldn't be allowed to exist as an individual city so built on fighting could be a threat to the entirety of the nation. But aside from a quick change in Nation I don't see any real problem with the character and ill accept him.