[quote=Arthanus]
Malikoy: Jagrid as a character looks fine to me, the only thing that gets me is the nation of choosing. Spartan's in general were of greek decent and although Alexander never conquered Sparta, they were very close and still part of his lands. and with that being said I believe that if there were to be a Spartan culture in this world it would develop in Anavio which is similar to its original home. Where as the Caudium is more based around Rome which was an entirely different Culture in which a city state like Sparta wouldn't be allowed to exist as an individual city so built on fighting could be a threat to the entirety of the nation. But aside from a quick change in Nation I don't see any real problem with the character and ill accept him.
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It is imperative to my character's development that he is from the empire and not anywhere else. I understand you believe a Spartan like culture is more appropriately belonging into the Kingdom of Anavio but Jagrid's not really a Spartan, the character is only inspired by Spartans, he is very roman like as I mentioned in the bio he also learned other things than combat, just like Romans who were intellectly rich, also both his parents are merchants so he is related to trading as well, more Roman than Spartan.