@Double: I think your character is now well balanced enough with the changes. Count him in. @Drummer: I know he's WIP, so just a few tips for now: [quote]Animal Connection: Reiji has an uncanny way with animals, never once has one acted aggressive or hostile towards him and they all seem to act like they respect him for some reason.[/quote] Seems like a cool gimmick, if you excuse the fact that we won't see a lot of enemies that are animals. Summons would.. somewhat count, but I feel like since they're a summon, and contracted to the summoner, they'd attack regardless of their feelings to the genin. [quote]Weakness: He can only use the Jutsu for 5 seconds.[/quote] is not really a weakness. This is a limit.. say the difference between a limit and a weakness is that the limit is something saying something about the timespan of a jutsu. A weakness would be something that can effectively counter or nullify a technique, or slow it down or make it less effective. [quote]... he can't use genjutsu ...[/quote] This is a valid weakness. I'd like to note that up until now practically everyone has 'genjutsu' listed in their weaknesses. This is starting to be somewhat of a trend. Keep in mind that bad-guy characters will be thought up by Hilland and possibly me and Res. If we opt to go for a genjutsu specialist at one point -- everyone is boned. I'm not telling you to change it, but every character has no clue about genjutsu. So, every character will be easily defeated when someone uses it on them. Just think about that. That's about it -- get a history and personality and you're good to go, but do improve on the rest as you see fit. @Res not that you need my acceptance, I guess, but that's a pretty damn solid character. [quote]She is an alcoholic and without drinking, she does suffer side effects/withdrawal [/quote] Are you planning on having her drink systematically? I can easily see you doing that because it's part of the gimmick of your character. If you do, it makes this rather obsolete as she'd be drinking all the time anyway. And keep an eye on the small pool of chakra -- it's easy to say that you have a small pool but pull jutsu out of your ass as if you were Naruto himself. We've all done that, and it's easy to say when I'm the one looking from the sideline, but try and keep it in mind when you enter combat. That's all, and I had to genuinely look for stuff to remark on -- you're in.