ahhhh i'm sorry i was gone for a while!!! [quote=Doctor Wizard][i]-- Vil Bolical --[/i][/quote] Hello! Sorry, but I won't be accepting this. u nu; Here are a few things you could maybe change or look at? 1. No need for occupation or race (though you can add that in 'Other' if necessary) 2. I didn't state where this rp takes place (assuming his moving to America continues to the present) 3. Although this is in the free section, I still have some expectations on writing level. With what you've written in your cs, I don't think your writing level is adequate enough. If you can fix your cs, I will gladly change my mind! [quote=Zakara]JadeMistress, nice character, but his personality is geared much more towards being prideful than a glutton (examples being someone who overeats or a hoarder).[/quote] Oh right, I can't believe I forgot about it. I intended for the characters' personalities to initially be different than their deadly sin, but since everyone already had their characters up, I decided against it. Thanks for letting me know xD Forgot to change it. [quote=GamingOwl]-- (no name?) --[/quote] Give him a name and fix what you wrote in your personality grammar-wise then you're accepted. Here's the list of pairs. Since I won't be able to start until tomorrow (and I need Doctor Wizard and GamingOwl to work on their cs a bit), I may change it, depending on if people join. Man, I didn't anticipate it to take this long to start orz; Rockelle and GamingOwl's character Faeya and Jamie Jack and Renee Luther and Clyde