[quote=Goldeagle1221]
I dunno, it seems raw. What does a militant elf carry? anything special about their weapons or fighting tactics? how have they remained so isolated in the center of a continent for so long? Where do the majority live? What kind of crimes are rampant? Just basic stuff to make the reader feel more intimate with the creation.
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You also just named a lot of stuff a lot of other people here tend to leave out or forget. Or over generalize.