[quote=BlazeGamma] The name of the MMO is Realms, and the characters aren't initially set up as stuck in the game. It's something that's going to happen fairly early on, and will be roleplayed out. [/quote] Isn't that how it always happens. Still no reason to leave those details out. Look I'm gonna help you, because clearly you aren't putting effort into this and I'd hate to see all these nice people who supported you get driven off. I've never been good with writing these kinds of intros to I apologize to every. But remember to either put this in your first post blaze, or if it inspires you to write your own then write that and put it in your first OOC post (that part is extremely important as Scarifar said). --- [quote][center][b]Realms.[/b] A world of new possibility. A world of many unique realms on the verge of chaos as a darkness begins to cloud the lands. In the midst of war new heroes are called into the world. Champions to fight for the purity of the Realms, but whose side will they fight for?[/center] Realms is, while not the first, is a new VRMMO unlike any other. Using the latest in dive technology, the user is able to interact in a fully immersive world full of magic. Fight for the Realms and use your strength to free the world, or become swayed by the darkness and help plunge Realms into tyranny. The choice is yours. - Excerpt from Realms Commercial[/quote] From here I am sure you can fill in some of the details, like what it is that will get us eventually trapped, and will it kill use or are our minds just trapped. Who it is was or just a freak accident. [hider=CS] Character Name: Player Name: (Not your username, the name of the person who owns the game, so to speak) Player Age: Race: (Human, Elf, Dwarf, Gnome, Halfling, Half Orc, Half Elf, Beast-People) Class: (Fighter, Rogue, Cleric, Paladin, Druid, Ranger, Wizard, Sorcerer, Barbarian) Appearance: (both game avatar and the player) Personality: Player History: [/hider]