Yeah I'm only talking about the Pendulum monsters.

Edited versions of what their effects should be, gramatically:

[u]Angel of Life[/u]
Pendulum effect: This card's Pendulum Scale is 4 unless you reveal 1 Fairy-type monster in your hand. During your Standby Phase, all Pendulum Summoned monsters you control gain 100 ATK. (I can't get it to make sense any other way)

Monster effect: This card can attack your opponent directly. If this card inflicts damage by a direct attack, gain 500 Life Points.

[u]Angel of Death[/u]
Pendulum Effect: If a Pendulum Monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Extra Deck, target 1 monster your opponent controls and destroy it. 

Monster Effect: Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 face up monster your opponent controls. Your opponent can discard 1 card to negate this effect.

Grammar is VERY important when creating yugioh cards. I don't want to say anything more in case I say something that I'll regret.