So, Illuminami, after reading your CS I noticed a few things that need major work.

First: This RP is considered somewhat of a high casual roleplay. It requires proper grammar and spelling. While your words may be spelled right, the grammer is not as up to par as we would like.

Second: The void gate only opened in Sovereign, which means that your character had to be in [i]Sovereign[/i] in order to be bonded with a kage. Then, they would have been stuck inside of Sovereign until the wall fell.

Third: While the powers of your onikage are really impressive, they are far too powerful. The second power is completely ridiculous, in my opinion. Plus, we already have a character that can absorb spirit. If you were to keep the first one instead, you would have to limit it very much. Small tasks even like transforming a bullet into a paper ball should take every bit of spirit in Irelia's body. The range would have to be very small, too. I strongly suggest changing your powers.

I hope this helps.