[quote=Gnar The Missing Link] @Thanatos:I really, really like Zan, to be honest. My only concern is this! [/quote] [quote=Thanatos] •Hospitalized Special One: None of his immediate family, [u]if any of his family is hospitalized it is unknown to him.[/u] (Meaning his Mom, Dad, Siblings, and Grandparents.) [/quote] [quote=Gnar The Missing Link] Are you sure about keeping it like this? I am more than fine with you having it like this, but I want you to be sure you want it like this, based on your backstory. If you are, then it's fine. [/quote] I worded the underlined part above in a way, that if I wanted to I could have Zan learn about a family member that is hospitalized. If that was okay with you of course. [quote=Gnar The Missing Link] As for ... -tries to say the name- ... the Framework, again, you are more than able to have some extra stuff for it. If not, they're both Accepted as they are! [/quote] Actually, the reason why I didn't put any weapons was because I felt Zan wouldn't use any weapons. Also I felt Zan would be too obsessed with getting revenge to use weapons, except maybe a melee weapon. I was expecting you to want me to change things, but I am happy you liked Zan.