Gee, can't we just say 'super-speed' or something and cut the pseudoscience technobabble? I'd rather 'magic' than some attempt to reduce movement to electrons. "Electron/electromagnetic flow/alteration" would result in electricity manipulation, and maybe the ability to move conductors.

But yeah, that felt nothing like the Void Gate opening. You've got massive earthquakes, floods through the streets, lightning, a huge flash of blinding light, and the Wall coming up. What are people still doing in that cafe after the Kages have been released? But in my opinion the character seems good, but my opinion isn't the one which counts here.