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Cyrus
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It's pretty good overall, though I'm slightly amused at the 20mm rifle, I hope you have some means of lugging that thing around? And as far as the backstory, the cities would have locked those doors and not let anybody out at the first sign of things finally happening. You would've had a 24 hour warning period to get to the city, and you wouldn't have been let out. Perhaps have her simply not able to reach the city in time?