[quote=Damiann47]Riley Thaster[/quote]

Aaaand, approved! You might want to throw in a little about why her parents couldn't make it in time, but the overall CS is good.

[quote=Mortalbean]Irving Lope/Slaven Dobroslav[/quote]

Also approved! The RP starts out near the dome built over most of Dallas, Texas, so it's perfectly reasonable to assume they could have reached it. I'll be adding the questions asked thus far and some others to an information section, and will start work on a CS of my own.
As far as working on improvements, I didn't see much that you didn't cover. I'll give it a re-read in a bit and tell you if anything pops out at me, but it looks pretty good from my perspective.