[quote=Delta44]
This looks interesting... Mind if I join? :P
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Feel free
[quote=WriterRaven]
Let me know if there's anything you feel needs changing.
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Accepted.
[quote=Sho Minazuki]
I have like, no in-depth knowledge on Star Wars and it's world and lore, so I'm gonna make a character learning everything from scratch. Yay.
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You wouldn't get to sixteen without a master, if you don't pass the initiate trials you are offered a place in the Exploration or AgriCorps branch of the Jedi, or to be an assistant in the temple as it is usually for a reason.

You have two powerful abilities, stealth and barrier. I can maybe allow you to know one (But not that good at it) if you explain it in your history.

Orphanages on Coruscant would be frequented by Jedi quite often for Force Sensitive children so it's unlikely he would need to sneak into the temple.

All this interest!