[quote=WilsonTurner]
See, I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi (just a bit less vocalized), so I was going to have the personality of my character reflect that. Any mistakes you make with your grammar or something, like in speech, he'll hear and criticize. Anything you do that wouldn't be very smart, he'll critisize. For example, he WILL criticize Mr. Lightning, because he gave away his power, a good measure of the extent he can use it, what he can do with it, and how much mana he has within himself to do all those things in a short time period. he'll call him foolish- anyone watching and wanting to attack him would now know what he can do, what he needs to defend himself, and anything else. My character will be the grim realist in the crowd of enthusiastic to withdrawn teenager wanna-be adventurers. The kind you'd dread if you wanna go over an idea with, but would gladly welcome his help in any serious matter.
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Sounds interesting, a critic always increases the drama. I don't mind people pointing out my errors. It's how we learn and grow.