I will look over your character tomorrow Yog. 
And guys I'm sorry I removed the accepted character from the first page because it wasn't allowing me to place my character there. 
I don't know I think I actually his a word limit or somthing... 
So I'm going to place them [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/73510/posts/ooc?page=1]here[/url]
That link will also be moved to the first page. 
Now since my characters are there I will allow you all to look over and tell me anything you guys thing is unfair, or OP and I will do my best to change them so I can remain fair to the rules and all of you :) 
Thank you for your time.