My cses are always up for criticism, even after the finished state and i apologise for the transgressions. I just wanted a basic outline to be done before i am forced to interact with my family for christmas. Ill do some basic editing in the morning but the cs remains at around ep percent so try not to judge it too hard. As for the whole other people thing, his control remains over his own only and solely.

EDIT: Yeah, ill admit i only read the top half before excitement took over. Everything will be fixed by tomorrow...i hope...or today. Time passes strangely.