Harbringer, I like how your sheet is written. Like it was written by a NEST Agent. But, there's a few things I have to address. Jazzy addressed his power, but there's a few more things that'll need a little tweaking. Now, don't take this as an attack on you, or whatever, you're not "rejected". All you need to do is fulfill is a little editing.

But before I get started; take a second, hard look at the OP. It's clear that you made a few mistakes that wouldn't have been made if the OP had been read a little clear.

[quote]Eye Color: Gold[/quote]

Technicolor eyes!

[quote]The attitude of snark and insults is continued, even when he begins his 'work' under us, but he gives up his gentle facade, putting on the guise of a psychopath. He enjoys inflicting pain and suffering on his targets as much as possible before finishing them off, often drawing out an easily won fight with small, gentle slashes to minor veins and arteries and bleeding an enemy out. [/quote]

Sorry bruh, but this sets off redflags for me. I'm not keen on accepting Socio/Psycho-paths, [i]especially[/i] when you tell me that they're going to be portrayed like this. Since this is "half-finished" I believe that this won't be true in the final product; but, I also feel as if this personality needs more detail, since he seems rather one dimensional at the moment.

[quote]It is recommended that we employ this agent in only the most essential crises if we wish to remain off the news.[/quote]

Sorry, but we're not playing as NEST agents. There's only three and they're made by friends, and that's where I'm capping it off. lol

[quote]Fashion, fashion, fashion. It might come as a given because of her power, but Shannon is a fashionista. She seems to always know what the best outfits are, and who has the best tastes. It's just because of her love of high fashion. She also likes books, writing, and poetry - She does indulge herself in some writing in her free times. But her favorite would have to be classical literature. Shannon also likes media - her favorite genre would be crime and mystery, like Law & Order. She also watches some cartoons (Like Disney movies) sometimes. Sometimes meaning when no one is looking. Shannon is a fan of ancient History, and Greek, Roman, Egyptian, and so on, cultures. [/quote]

*Loud cough*

[quote]Elijah's main 'skill' if you could call it that would be his connections, with both legitimate agencies and some of the more detestable ones that operate in the darkness. While NEST is interested in obtaining information about these rat warrens, we have decided that it is not worth the possible adverse effects.[/quote]

Gonna need some elaboration on this. What "agencies" does he have connections to? Even then, I think that's pushing it a bit. We aren't really playing as government agents/super heroes.

[quote]While Elijah is capable of enhanced regeneration and blood production, it does not mean that he is a constant fountain...well, it does, but it does not mean that he can produce it quickly in industrial amounts. The longer a fight rages, the more tired and haggard he will get. If he is too liberal with his powers, he will succumb more quickly to fatigue than most other observed meta-humans. If subject runs rampant, it is suggested we wait for him to expend his energy before moving in for neutralisation.[/quote] 

Sorry, but this isn't going to cut it in terms of weaknesses. He has a rather strong ability, and "he gets tired" faster isn't going to work. I feel like he needs two or three more weaknesses. For one weaknesses, I suggest that if he produces too much, all of it doesn't get oxidized properly. Which can cause [i]some[/i] problems for him that is.

[quote]Internal Damage: Being struck even once by Elijah is a dangerous thing, as he can often leave traces of his own blood within an opponent's bloodstream as observed in [DATA EXPUNGED]. So far he has been observed using it to create artificial strokes and internal haemorraging.[/quote]

Vetoing this so hard.