[quote=VitaVitaAR]
Um, I'll be going through every bio individually shortly, but there's a couple things I spotted that I'll quickly address."Tank" is a bit too video game-y for what I intended for the "Class" field, and there IS a Japan-analogue in this world but you'd have to explain why they're in the Medieval Europ place and also pick a more fitting appearance.I'll be addressing bios individually shortly.
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But....But....My character IS a tank.

Nah its cool, I changed it to sound better. I think.