Sorry, but this sheet will be a [i]lot[/i] of work before I even consider accepting it. The appearance and personality sections are absolutely bare bones and don't tell me much at all about your character. This is advanced. His sample-post doesn't show too much about your character either, only his fighting ability. Other than that, I don't see any problems with it other than a lack of detail. If you want, take a gander at the character deposit and see some of the sheets that have already been accepted for an idea.