[quote=GingerBoi123]
Riiight, I get what you're saying... sort of. Unfortunately for me, this would be my very first advanced roleplay so I am having trouble as to coming up with what else I could add.
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For appearance, describe his build, facial features, hair, skin tone, eyes, and so on. 

For personality, tell how he acts around others, how he feels deep down, morality, quirks, views of the setting, how he acts by himself, and such and such.