@TheRider: Okay, um the last real issues I have now are more, um, well I guess I just never really though of vampires being a thing for their setting. ^^; But the bigger issue is kind of one of my IC ones. Basically, um, as a paladin of Reon, Tanya [i]really[/i] dislikes undead. She won't hurt sapient, non-malevolent undead, but she's be [i]VERY[/i] unhappy if she discovered his nature by surprise. @Darcs: Accepted. @Closet Nerd: I still don't feel his backstory fits in well(the insinuation that the towns around Meridan are disease-ridden hellholes, for one), and I don't really thing the whole "ratman alchemist" thing fits in so well. On top of that, your decision to make him "add randomness" really does not fill me with confidence. @Sadko: If you are going to include a backstory, I want to see it. The backstory's only optional if you're not going to include one at all, in the RP or otherwise.