Alright! Xander. Let's play a game of "Fix the CS!" Name, Age, Gender etc... are really straight forward. Let's start with Ethnicity! That Ethnicity are you? [quote=22xander] Ethnicity: European mutt with unnotisiable bits of native American.[/quote] Alexander would be [i]Caucasian[/i] with hints of Native American ancentary. Next is: Relationship Status [quote=22xander] Relationship Status: in a relationshipz. Well, several. [/quote] What are we? 7? Do we t@lk lik diz n shizz - yo yo yo, t3xt sp3@k iz [b]not cool in casual[/b] Alexander would be "In several relationships" Relationship: [quote=22xander] Religion: believes that whatever is believed in is true, thus all religions are equally right [/quote] Just... what? Rewrite the sentence to something understandable and we'll talk. Alcoholic Preference: [quote=22xander] Alcoholic Preference: (ok I have to Wright this down, I tried putting in although and it auto corrected to Smirnoff. Lol!) He doesn't drink, but he would like whiskey if he did [/quote] Wright? That whole bracketed sentence leads me to believe you don't care much for the quality of your characters, therefore the quality of your writing. Major: [quote=22xander] Major: journalism and wrighting [/quote] It'd probably be Journalism and Literature But I don't really know how he'll do either of those when "writing" isn't even spelt right... Personality:[quote=22xander] Personality: always somewhare between manic and depressed. [/quote] This is a big one that a lot of people don't seem to get. Personality is completely different to [i]mood[/i]. In personality, we want to know who your character is, what he likes doing, why he likes doing it - how he interacts with people. A general overall description of your character that is longer than seventeen words. History: Same as personality. Why is he the way he is. What happened to make him clinically depressed etc... Power: [quote=22xander] Power: chronokaniesis-manipulation of time and space. He can open a rift in the fabric of space and time and go anywhere... Even outside time and space. His eye have become red and vulpine while His ears have migrated to the top of his head as Fox ears. He was taken in by the government because of his obvios phisical changes and they put a metal shock collar on him. [/quote] Cool power. Remember, our characters only got their powers last night - so they wouldn't be using them just yet. And Fox ears? Furry? All in all: Put some time and effort into your work. Run it through spell check before you post it. Other people read this and make judgement calls. Some wouldn't want to roleplay with you simply based on the character sheet you've generated. And if that's all too much for you to take in, you don't belong in the Casual Section of RPG - you'd belong in Free. I'm not trying to be mean, but you just don't seem to be understanding why you've been denied.