[quote=22xander] I... My character has my own past and it's just about as is... I tend to do that, use myself, I can change his name to the legal name of Alexander, not that anyone calls me that... Ever. I can try to describe it, but my 'transition' as you put it is kinda hard to explain. I, and presumably he still has problems, he just somehow sorrounded himself with people who were worse... I'm not going to put details, but let's just say I've been a real help to several people who are to stubborn to go to a real psychology expert. In any case, I can change it but I do want to tell you that it's not contrived, it's my f*#cked up life :pEdit: also it's not a class, it's like 2 or 3 kids from his school who are worse off then him and who he can help. [/quote] [quote=22xander] [B]Ok, I just realized that his backstory might not make sence in Japan[/B] I'm changeing it, hope the works :p [/quote] There we go. Also, I can not condone self-insert characters. I was tired when I posted last, but that was also in my mind- both actually. A combination of "this feels like a self insert a little bit" and "I don't feel like this would work in Japan", and that's one of the character rules atm. O.O Yeah, with what could potentially happen in this RP, you do [b][u][i]not[/b][/u][/i] want to feel personal equivalence to your character. Things may happen due to other characters, certain enemies, and my own "I wonder how this character would do with this situation", or simple plot advancement, and I'd not want it to seem like an attack on any specific player. I apologize for the inconvenience, but it will save you trouble in the long run. QED- I'm playing at least one all-female pair and I'm a guy. Even I accept that some pain may come to all my characters, but heck, I'd do it voluntarily because it makes for good character deveopment. [quote=RBYDark] ....look, dude, I can't really rp with self-inserts. I've done it before and inevitably it's always taken personally if my character has a disagreement with them, and I really don't want to go through that stuff for the fifth or so time.ETA: To clarify, not saying you'll have to start over. I'll probably drop though. Pretty sure Tob'll be okay. [/quote] I'd rather you not drop. Besidesyou'retheonlyoneherewhomI'mawareoftheirwritingability. Plus I'm aware you'll engage in a bit more darksome situations. [quote=Silver Fox]I'll edit in a digimon soon[/quote] I like, I like. Note that his hydrophobia will be exploited at least once. Protip- I will [i]not[/i] simply have someone's Digimon take heavy damage or be reverted to an egg [i]just[/i] because they're a Leomon. If there's another reason, however... Also, wow, lots of Japanese Child Protective Services instances here. Or, two... which is a lot for the small sample size. [quote=22xander]A new backstory, how's that?[/quote] Sorry to poke holes, but Japan isn't known for giving dual citizenship. It still feels a bit confused and lacks details that complete the story. Lots about where he is/how he got there, little about personality. And I'd rather you not use your real/username for your character name for the above reason. Plus you're referencing things in your Digimon sheet that aren't established in your human character, and it seems that the future interaction is highlighted more than the actual characteristics of the Digimon. And, a few technical errors- all your images are broken. Also, SkullMeramon's an Ultimate, not a Mega. Thirdly, I didn't expressly say this, but a Champion should have one to two Techniques that are used, and I'd say 3 three for Ultimates. If it's explained well I might allow a third on a Champion or a fourth on an Ultimate (the latter not being that hard really), but not like five or six on a Champion. In addition, we're not using an MP system really, so... Okay, I didn't want to do this- you seem like you're interested, but I have to think of the stability of the RP here. I'm looking for at the very least that you're going to put your best effort into it, and I'd prefer a show of quality writing to the best of your ability, but if you're not going to give at least a solid 80% of your effort consistently for the RP, then I'll have to give the slot to someone else. I'm not saying I'm doing that now, but it will be the case if you don't have improvement before the IC starts, and you will be considered in consideration for seat 12 until then, but someone else could take it once I put the OOC up. Fair warning, yes? Sorry for rambling guys.