[quote=22xander]
I am going to simply change the line, to make it make more since.
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Okay. Just tell me when you do.
[quote=Silver Fox]
Okay, so just about finished my digimon. But I'm a bit confused on what you meant on the name overarching and the control method?
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By overarching, I mean like... in the manga V-Tamer, the Veedramon is named Zero. Every time he Digivolves, Taichi still calls him Zero. Like that. Basically, what's the limitation of Leopardmon? Granted, they're not very powerful attacks by them selves, so the tactical use is probably the redeeming factor, rather than something that needs to be nerfed. I do have a few concerns/suggestions. 1- did you ask the artist to use those designs? I just think that's proper to do. Also, Leopardmon Leopard Mode is a bit redundant. Maybe call it like... Beast Mode, or Panthra Mode (like the Genus) or something? I mean, call it what you want, but that's just my suggestion for non-awkward narrative.