I'm not going to address the rest of this at the moment, because it's late, and I'm a tad peckish, but not even I know the kind of pacing we'll have. I'll be honest and say that I won't drag early parts on too far, but no one can be entirely sure when what will happen until it's almost happening. Secondly, since the Knights are the focal point of the RP, I feel like it's more likely that you should choose how you're playing that first.
As a side note, your clarity still needs some work bro.