[quote=NarcissisticPotato]
I think Kyle prefers for you to post it here so he can okay it before he allows you to post it to the Character Bin!
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Aye, what he says. Doesn't really matter, especially as it looks like we'll be getting 'Character' Tabs soon! :D

[quote=PlazmaStryke]
Special Skill?: Battle High.
Although not a skill, it is a state of mind that Mark can enter when truely enjoying a battle or kicking plenty of ass that allows him to exponentailly grow for a short period. It seems to have something to do with a State of his mind and his adrenaline that allows for him to generally grow stronger: His strength, agility, speed, Personal Intelligence, Reaction Speed, Instincts, and Battle Prowess. It does however limit his lucidity to the world, making it hard for him to control himself beyond the fight and in seeing anyone that is in his way as anyone but his enemy. He is always found to be exhausted after using it, and is not really something he can just turn on and off like a skill. It is more of a personal Ability.
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A couple of points/questions:
-In terms of his personality are you saying that he has a dissociative identity disorder? If not, then his personality is all over the place and kind contradicts itself in places. Sometimes its better to say less about personality in the CS and let his words and actions in the IC do the talking. 

-In terms of the special skill, really it has to be a skill if it's affecting his stats. Also, isn't the skill basically just 'His stats go up in battle'? As for the negative effect of it, your wording could be a little clearer. I'm reading as it some sort of 'blood lust'?

-And lastly, it would be cool if you also had a pic or description of what your armour looks like. Not necessary though, especially if you were perhaps thinking of upgrading. 

As with every other player, I don't accept until I run out of things to moan about :P

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I'm a bit busy this weekend but I'll aim to start the RP before Tuesday.