Your progress is good. There are still some... conveyance issues, mainly sometimes confused spelling. It still stands that Lobomon is a Champion, and I'd prefer if at least one of Gankoomon's canon techniques is kept.
Your personality sections are fine now. Perhaps replace Lobomon with, say, WereGarurumon, or MachGaogamon, as other wolf like Ultimates? Even IceLeomon/Panjyamon could fit the bill, since he has a sword.