> ### MAH MILKSHAKE BRINGS COOOWS

Close enough :P Your character is accepted, but there is just a couple of minute points: 

1. I like ellipses, but I a greatly believe that they should be used sparingly. There are a few in your CS that seem unnecessary, if not misplaced.
2. I like your ability but the origin seems a little random. I can't think of a better origin though, so perhaps don't worry about it. 
3. Why is everyone is using spears? haha

@Plasma

Fair enough. Tbf the RPs I'm in tend to be very slow moving, but that's good sometimes. 


@Everyone

Like it says in the first post, characters can be in any guild but I would suggest joining the Braziers, The Night Fissures (TNF) or a player-made guild because you will have more freedom over the plot with them. The Blood Dragons, White Lotus and The Order will have main plots centered around them eventually so players won't be able to do lots with them (cause it might spoil what we have planned). Sorry if this seems a little controlling, but at least players will get to decide how things progress once these plots are initiated. 

**I will have the first post up for tomorrow night!**

...or maybe not. I might wait for the post formatting to improve a little first.