Looks good. I like your attack descriptions. Very nice. The personality's good there, especially with the Agumon. I quite like the ... not sure what to call it. Dissonance? And as I was reading it, I was thinking "Wait, we might have two MetalGreymon", then I saw you were using RizeGreymon, which is cool. Also, nice use of the alternate arts, specifically for Agumon.

Not sure I see the re-working, but it's good. I'd still suggest you having a form of barrier. Oh, very important- how do you plan on handling Omega Inforce?