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Don't know about the picture but I changed the rest
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You're gonna need to proofread that, Jang. And type out numbers rather than just using the number.
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Room for me?
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Sure. Is that Braum as your avatar?
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Hell yeah it is!
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Also, if I could my character was gonna have similar origin to Braum
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Well, I've done some...
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I don't honestly know Braum's origin. I actually just started playing LoL again today, and Braum was free to play so I used him. That's literally the only reason I recognized him. Xander, slight alteration to your backstory: Ironthorn at large was occupied by the Empire to make use of its vast mineral wealth. Helmfirth got in the way, and so they were subjugated by the invading force. The taking of slaves is actually not performed by the Legion itself, but by companies who basically follow the army. A town or civilization that surrenders to Anaxan rule and pays their taxes are pretty safe(Pax Anaxa, you might say). But Helmfirth resisted, and battle ensued. Fleeing civilians(possibly Alexander, carried away by his caretaker) were picked off by the slavers. Let me know if you find that acceptable, we can work on it otherwise.
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We can figure it out, I was going to put more but my phone isn't cooperating.
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> You're gonna need to proofread that, Jang. And type out numbers rather than just using the number. I don't know what you mean by type out numbers then using the numbers. do mean to type out the words like 1 is mean to be one? also I don't think I can edit it again because if I do I loose the information I already put in. really flawed system mahz did, so do you want me to change something specific or just general proof read
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I mean write "one" instead of "1" yes. And yeah, a general proofread, there's a lot of type errors. But wait, do you have problems with losing data when you edit? I've never had that. Are you on a phone?
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Am I correct in assuming female characters wouldn't really fit in this game?
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No, they'd fit in just fine. I know I didn't mention any female gladiators, but the arena is owned by a woman. In fantasy settings I prefer to have cultures be more progressive regarding gender than they were in real life, because it makes for a greater range of characters. That said, female gladiators are rarer than males. Because female slaves have even more barbaric uses. Most women gladiators are actually willing volunteers. By the by, I don't know if everyone missed the fact that not all gladiators are slaves, but some of them are just athletes seeking a very risky glory. Also note that not all slaves come from conquest. Many are born into it, or else sold into the Anaxan market by their own countrymen. You can also be enslaved as punishment for a crime. I hope nobody is upset if I take the basic premise of your character's culture and sort of run with it.
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Interested! Will start thinking of a character.
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> I mean write "one" instead of "1" yes. > > And yeah, a general proofread, there's a lot of type errors. But wait, do you have problems with losing data when you edit? I've never had that. Are you on a phone? Not just my phone and my laptop, I can't edit without losing the words I already put down. I just put down general info I can do much better when actual posts for the ooc and ic
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More added, is thair any way my pic could be acurate? It might be the sort of armor he trained in at Ironthorn.
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Weird, I've been able to edit my posts no problem. In fact, my above post was edited like three times. What you could do is copy it before hitting edit, and then just paste it in the edit text box.
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> > I mean write "one" instead of "1" yes. > > > > And yeah, a general proofread, there's a lot of type errors. But wait, do you have problems with losing data when you edit? I've never had that. Are you on a phone? > > Not just my phone and my laptop, I can't edit without losing the words I already put down. I just put down general info I can do much better when actual posts for the ooc and ic > I had the same problem, You just have to do it on the device you first wrote it on.
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So maybe it's in your cookies rather than in the site's databanks. Yeah, that needs to be fixed.
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For me it was from switching from laptop to phone... also, hows my CS look?
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