My CS 

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Name: Blix Kirasu
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Alignment: Wanted
Weapon Preference: Light swords
Weapon(s): Two modded shortswords. He holds one backwards and one regularly. Each is modded differently.

Koho (the backwards one): This sword is red with a black stripe down the center and many blue glowing lines etched around it.
-Can send a slice of energy at an opponent.
-Becomes very very dull if it doesn't get blood once a day.

Ankho: This sword is blue with a white stripe down the center and many red glowing lines etched around it. 
-It can morph into a shield if the module is activated.
-A blue energy circles the blade at random. If a target is found with the locating module, then the stream of energy hits them. If it finds no targets or all attacks are cancelled, the energy hits the holder.
Appearance: Blix almost always has on his red and black armor. He occasionally removes his helmet which helps him with his vision and is where his targeting system is. Blix is about 5’11” and is fairly lean in his build. He has auburn eyes that some would call golden and a mess of hair. It reaches his eyes in the front and occasionally slides in the way of his vision (which is never a problem with the helmet on) and comes down to the middle of his neck in the back. It is fairly straight and easy to maintain, but when it becomes too much of a hassle, Blix cuts it himself.
Personality: Blix is a very selfish individual. He will rarely go out of his way to help another and is always out for himself. The only form of rules he follows is the moral code by which he lives by, which is fairness and equality above all. The second is vengeance. Blix will help others get back at someone or even the odds, but that’s only in extreme cases. Blix is sarcastic, quick-witted, and intelligent. The only time he seems to lose his intelligence is when he loses control of his rage. He then becomes stubborn and doesn’t think about anything before he does it which can prove to be a problem in a fight. His anger does, however, seem to give him a ridiculous amount of energy and power as he becomes a brute fighter (yet simple tactics could outdo him at this point).
Bio: Blix was born in a world of hatred. He was raised by the sword and knew nothing but anger for the better part of his life. Blix lived on the streets and never had any real parent figures. This meant that his ideals and views of life early on where propaganda and inflated news. Blix learned how to fight at a young age, being on the streets of a human encampment. Nothing there was ever stable, and anything he got was stolen. Because of this, he learned how to fend for himself and fought to the very end of every fight. When he was 11, Hierarchs invaded the camp he lived at. Blix had learned to hate the Hierarchs since a young age due to propaganda and fought every one that came at him. Blix was easily taken down, but he wouldn’t stop getting back up. One of the Hierarchs thought this amusing and impressive, so they kidnapped Blix and brought him back to Sugeretia.The Hierarch took him back to his training camp and threw Blix in with the other Hierarchs without saying a word. At first everyone was suspicious, but when Blix’s captor talked to the leader of the camp, everyone expected Blix to keep up with the others. For five years, Blix trained with the Hierarchs. He barely managed to keep up with their training and became a well trained fighter. Blix also learned that there was more than one side to every story and came to respect the Hierarchs rather than hate them. Blix learned that to survive, you must be selfish. If he were stranded somewhere, he couldn’t worry about another being. He would have to only worry about himself. Blix was becoming a very harsh man as the Hierarch training program was changing the way he viewed life. At the age of 16, Blix found himself at the Hierarch initiation ceremony. It was the ceremony of which a Hierarch went from a boy to a man. In the ceremony, two fighters entered a circular arena where a crowd watched and cheered them on. These two fighters would go to the death and the better fighter would win who would then join the Hierarch military. Bix was forced into the arena with another young aspiring Hierarch who had been in the same training program as Blix had. Each was handed a weapon and Blix chose a sword. The opposing Hierarch waited and baited Blix. Blix knew he was hopelessly outmatched in strength, so he had to rely on tactics. After a bit of circling, Blix managed to sweep one of his opponent’s legs and bring him to a knee. Blix turned with a swift kick to his opponent’s face. His opponent hit the ground hard on his back. With no remorse, Blix brought down the killing blow with a stab to the chest. Thus, Blix was put on his first mission; to destroy a human encampment. Blix realized how savage the race was and that they were planning to eradicate the humans for no apparent reason. Blix could be no part of this, so he escaped the planet by sneaking onto a ship where he had no idea was going. Eventually he landed on Triwaku and found the Triani people. After five years of being stuck there, Blix learned the way of the Triani people. He never learned anything about energy, but he learned to respect nature and the nature within himself. Between these three races, Blix had a very unique view in life. As a gift, one of the Triani people granted Blix the sister blades called Ankho and Koho. Rather than be powered by technology, they were powered by energy as the Triani built them. Blix was now ready to leave and take his own journey in the world. He had developed a code by which he lived by and his hate for the Hierarchs had been reimplemented. Blix had decided that fairness was what this world needed and what the Hierarchs were taking away. They had no reason to be fighting the humans and it was an unfair fight because the humans had no chance. So, Blix attacked every Hierarch he saw. He found his way back to Suguretia and raised as much hell as he could. Blix had to be careful as all of the Hierarchs matched or bettered him in skill. Blix made a name for himself against the Hierarchs and through the connections the Hierarchs had, they labelled Blix as a terrorist and have hired mercenaries from around the universe to hunt him down. Now, Blix is hoping to make some sort of rebel alliance to take down and end the tyranny of the Hierarchs. However, in the eyes of the universe and most people who won’t listen to a ‘terrorist,’ Blix is a criminal who needs to be stopped. Blix has been on the run since he started attacking Hierarch organizations and hasn’t stopped since. He was trying to escape a chase when his stolen ship was taken down and he crash landed in Xenafor. It was a miracle that he survived, but he still has to survive the mercenaries that come next. 

I will be making a CS for the Alpha King, but that will take a bit more time and he won't be fully awakened in the beginning of the RP anyways. I know the bio is long, I just got really into making the character. So I don't expect anything this detailed on any of yours unless you just want to. 

@Laue: Everything looks fine accept for you joining the human military and stealing from the human development of a weapon. Since the humans are barely surviving, they won't really have a military, much less a government. You could join a militia of some sort, or maybe a different military, but not the human one. As far as the weapon goes, you could say it was an interplanetary project with multiple races involved and you took it from some military on whichever planet. Other than that, everything looks good.