> > Hello, I'm new here..
> > 
> > Please tell me if I do something wrong
> 
> 1) make sure your character is accepted before you make an IC post.
> 2) work on your grammar a little bit for your character and posts.
> 3) you're accepted, just work on your grammar.

I'm so sorry I didn't know

I already fixed it, please tell me if it still wrong, thanks !