Hello Ploxerdon, I'm Kyle - Grammar Nazi extraordinaire. 

Few things: 
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[*]Please keep posts in past tense.
[*]Though I can't fault your use of paragraphs, I am a little confused as to why you start a new line for nearly every sentence?
[*]If your character is attacking a player without using the dueling system (as would appear to be the case in your post), they will become an orange player. That's fine, if that's what you wish for your character. But I thought I'd quickly clarify that point just in case.
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