Okay so first., Double post sorry. 

Second. I don't know how to write narratives for other people to play in, so if I am controlling the story too much, or making things go ways you don't think they fit, please tell me. I genuinely want to make this an interesting setting and story for you to play in, but if I make it too stiff or unusable to you. Alert me. 

All this said, another post of my weird pacing and hastily put together plot is up a few seconds.