[quote=Kiri][Snip][/quote] I'm going to hold off on approving this until we get the first characters settled into the story, but I don't see any problems. [quote=manapool1][Snip][/quote] I suggest reading the OP a little more closely, as well as checking out the example sheet I posted. Also, I'm unsure that your writing meets the minimum requirements for the casual section. [quote=Kiri][PICTURES GALORE, OMG.][/quote] Those are really awesome. I'm working on a post now, btw.