[quote=@rextremendum]
Problem one: your planet has a fucking retarded mass, which presents problems of orbit and likelyhood of formation, not to mention magnetic shenanigans or what have you. Your people are way too tall to live on a planet with 3x gravity - there is no way things would evolve that height, there is no reason, as it would become ridiculously inefficient on a 3x gravity planet. I am not even going to start on the bug telepathy, because you fucking know that is retarded and you fucking know why
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oh, I forgot to change the planet, also, the Zargan's have been reduced to 7-8ft tall, and I think telepathy can be left alone, their are magical talking ponies in this galaxy after all =3

[quote=@rextremendum]
in-YOUR-end-o
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.... terrible pun

also, besides resizing the planet... *braces from criticism* the NS is finished...