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[quote=@Lugubrious]@Loki and Agent, I did indeed find all those separators hazardous to the flow and continuity of the piece.  While not necessarily bad, you might ask me for feedback next time, as most of the other pairs did.[/quote]

[@LokiLeo789] Reading it over now that I have slept I would like to refine the collab some more. Today's a busy day for me so how about Sunday?

As for shooting Shiro with one shot or not... If the gun don't work, use more gun.
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Sundays fine, just pm me when ya ready.