[quote=@Krayzikk]
@Narcissistic: The funny part, is I knew someone would make a joke. XD

[quote=@Lugubrious]
Very nice, Krayzikk!  That said, I have three recommendations.  The first is putting an extra space between each section, just so that they're even easier to differentiate from one another.  Second, we have three other characters whose colors are shades of gray; in factor, steel gray and gunmetal gray are practically the same thing, so I'd recommend something else.  The last is Ben's name, which doesn't seem to me to be evocative of either color or theme.  Something about RWBY that makes it interesting is its entire convention of names.  Sure, RWBY has a few ordinary names thrown in there (Nora, Blake), but if at all possible I urge you to reconsider.  Since Deinamig means 'dynamic' in Welsh, for instance, you might find the Welsh words for colors and use one of them.  Just an idea.
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The formatting is easily fixed, I'll do it after I'm done typing this. And actually, the name's already fixed. Not surprised it wasn't obvious, because I didn't find out until I was writing the CS last night. XD "Lloyd" is actually derived from the Welsh "llwyd", meaning "gray". That was actually a significant portion of why I finally went with gray, because, well.

I liked cerulean.

But working "cerulean" into a name without making it sound ridiculous is unbelievably hard. XD
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Oh, nice find!  I guess you'll be fine as is.  Just so you know, though, Cerulean is thought to have derived from the Latin word Caelum, which means 'sky'.  Fewer things are more evocative of the color than that.

You're accepted, and you can post your sheet in Characters, though you'll have to wait until Kaithas and Cirus post their sheets before you begin.