[quote=@Zlatan Criceto] Lemme know if you want something changing. [b]Character name:[/b] Magnus Blackclaw [b]Criminal?:[/b] Yes [b]Convicted for:[/b] Seventythree counts of murder in the first degree, possession of illegal weapons, property damage in excess of 8.9 billion, conspiracy to cause mass fatalities, facilitating the production of improvised explosives, eight counts of murdering a member of the security services, grand theft auto, resisting arrest and two hundred counts of assault with intent to cause serious injury or death. [b]Species:[/b] Mesocricetian. [b]Gender:[/b] Male [b]Sexual orientation:[/b] Straight. [b]Age:[/b] 15, 35 in human years. [b]Appearance:[/b] Magnus is a long haired Mesocricetian, meaning that the fur covering his body is roughly ten inches long, and tapers off into a 'cape' near his hindquarters. The colour of his fur can best be described as 'charcoal', with vertical stripes of white, black and grey going from one end of his body to the other. He has a nasty scar behind his left ear, which is coloured white (whilst the other is black), and new fur has yet to grow over it. His eyes, customary of his people, are black. Magnus' pointed nose is slightly crooked, and missing thin strips of fur across its length, whilst his incisors are yellow and nicked in places. [b]Height: [/b] On four feet, roughly 5ft. On two feet, roughly 7ft. [b]Weight:[/b] 321 ibs. [b]Apparel:[/b] Magnus wears an improved version of the Mesocricetian Quadrupedal Ballistic Combat Armour (QBCA). QBCA is made from square fragments of plasma treated steel titanium bound together by a leathery synthetic anti-ballistic material known as targon, and forms a jumpsuit that protects a Mesocricetian's vital organs. The visual effect is not dissimilar to a turtle's shell, and so many refer to the QBCA affectionately as T-shell. As Mesocricetian soldiers move on all fours, and stand only to aim their weapons, the shoulder, back and arm areas of the QBCA are extra thick. The chest and stomach regions, therefore, are more susceptible to missiles. However, this allows Mesocricetians to maintain their dexterity. Magnus' version is made from the latest lightweight anti-ballistic materials, allowing him to move quickly and easily whilst still benefiting from the effectiveness of QBCA affords its user. Additionally, Magnus wears a Panzer Helm III, or PZH III. The Panzer Helm, designed by Earth's military, was developed especially for Mesocricetian infantry. Essentially, it is a thickly armoured helmet, covering the face, ears and neck with blast-resistant alloys. Moreover, each Panzer Helm comes fully equipped with 'Optical Assist' technology, which works to provide the otherwise near-blind Mesocricetians with almost 20/20 quality vision. Optical Assist also features night-vision and thermal imaging modes. [b]Weapons:[/b] The Mount Sinai Munitions Corp MS-32K, Meso Variant. Smaller than the original, and lacking some of the range, the MS32KM is designed for the smaller arm-length of the Mesocricetians, making for a more comfortable grip. [b] Equipment:[/b] Energy powered arc welder, capable of cutting through several types of materials. [b]Personal starfighter:[/b] N/A [b]Skills: [/b] Engineer, Systems Technician [b]Weaknesses:[/b] Extremely susceptible to rapid temperature changes. [b]Powers:[/b] Behavioural Inhibitor Off Switch - Magnus' Behavioural Inhibitor can be controlled by the team's designated leader. Deactivating it will instantly revert Magnus to his native mental state, and he will attack everyone. Whilst this may seem rather pointless, and potentially dangerous, a Mesocricetian's natural high aggression and resourcefulness can be an ace card when situations go to shit. [b] Personality: [/b] Magnus is very quiet, and barely speaks. Although he does grunt a lot, in fact, grunting is all he seems to do. He will often zone out if someone talks to him about anything other than the mission, displaying his obvious disinterest in what they may have to say. [b] Biography:[/b] Magnus lived an ordinary life as a dockyard systems engineer, grinding away 9 til 5 every day without much purpose - like many of his kind. One fateful morning during a routine logistical systems check, he suffered a serious head injury when a crane lost its grip on a container, and released it on top of him. Consigned to a coma for four weeks, Magnus' damaged behavioural inhibitor went undetected by hospital staff. Upon waking, he thanked those who had helped him back to health, promptly left the hospital, murdered a weapon's store owner, took a stash of guns and waged a one man war against his own peoples. Six days of death and destruction later, and Magnus was finally apprehended. Hundreds had been killed or wounded in a rampage that had torn half a city to pieces. Although originally sentenced to death, the Meso Supreme Court took mercy on him, noting that his actions were committed out of "diminished responsibility" due to his damaged behavioural inhibitor. Although some secretly feel that it was Meso's human benefactors who had averted the death penalty, seeing the potential in one such as Magnus. He was swiftly and quietly transferred to Oblivion Squad, and there he has remained for two years. Since his rampage, a new generation of robust and hardy behavioural inhibitors were commissioned for use on Meso. The main advantage of these new inhibitors, aside from their sturdiness, is the Meso Central Intelligence Agency's ability to monitor them, and identify any individuals at risk of repeating the Magnus Incident. [/quote] Only have an issue with the bio. Oblivion squad doesn't have a waiting list, it's usually brought up around or right after the trial, one can't be in it for two years. Everyone in this is new to the squad as a whole. [quote=@Inuyasha] [center][b][h1]| Jack Rose |[/h1][/b][/center] [center][img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/300/2/d/smuggler_captain_by_buashei-d6rw8ns.png[/img][/center] [u][b]Criminal?:[/b] [/u] Yes [u][b]Convicted for:[/b][/u] Three counts of possession of illegal firearms and too many counts of drug trafficking and distribution [u][b]Species:[/b][/u] Human & Proud [u][b]Gender:[/b][/u] Male [u][b]Sexual orientation:[/b][/u] Heterosexual [u][b]Age:[/b][/u] 29 [u][b]Weapons:[/b][/u] Carries a .357 Magnum [url=http://www.defensereview.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/Rhino_Revolver_Black_5-inch_Barrel_Chiappa_Firearms_1.jpg]Rhino 50DS[/url] w/ Armor Piercing Rounds & a [url=http://media.moddb.com/images/mods/1/4/3645/15083.gif]Masamune Plasma Knife[/url] (a regular hunting knife, however with the press of a button becomes superheated and can cut through things as tough as titanium). [u][b]Equipment:[/b][/u] [list] [*] Augmented eyes -- can zoom in slightly, can activate nightvision, increased accuracy, thermal vision, and so forth [*] Cybernetic implants on his calf, bicep, quadricep, and thigh muscles. When these muscles are tired the implants kick them into an "overdrive" of sorts, injecting them with adrenaline and aiding them allowing for enhanced strength and running when needed. [/list] [u][b]Personal starfighter:[/b][/u] N/A [u][b]Skills:[/b][/u] [list] [*] [b]Chemistry [/b]- Because of Rose's background in drugs he has extensive knowledge about chemicals and the chemistry behind them. For example he knows what to chemicals to mix to make a mustard nitrogen explosion and what chemicals to mix to make a hydroelectric acid to dissolve a body. This includes the ability to be able to easily identify chemicals and know what they do. [*] [b]Gunplay[/b]- Sleazy crime required Rose to know how to properly use a gun. Rose is no prodigy marksman, but when staring down an iron sight he can hit most things with respectable ease. [*] [b]Navigation / Steering[/b] Rose's trafficking has taken him all over the galaxy and as a result he knows his way around. He commonly steered "borrowed" Freight ships but has had experiences with all kind of ships. [/list] [u][b]Weaknesses:[/b][/u] Rose is attempting to "cleanse" himself of his coke addiction. As one might imagine the withdrawal symptoms cause major drawbacks. Headaches, fatigue, etc. [u][b]Powers:[/b][/u] N/A [u][b]Personality:[/b][/u] Rose is very charismatic and charming; some people say he has a way with words. He loves to show people a fun time and can party like no one else. However, when the need arises he can be the brutal and ruthless Kingpin that he is -- showing no mercy whatsoever. It has sometimes been said that it bears an uncanny resemblance to a personality disorder, however this is not the case. [u][b]Biography:[/b][/u] Born to a poor family in the slums, Rose grew up in what was known as the Iron Jungle. It was an extremely industrialized city, with thick black coal and oil fumes permeating the air. In the Iron Jungle men would march to their work in coal mines or factories and come back covered in soot. It was in the underbelly of this city that Rose made his worth. Rose's family's economic standing got him involved with the wrong crowd fast. Wealthy businessmen would supply dealers with psychedelics and other drugs to sell on the streets for a quick dime. It didn't take long for Rose to get wrapped up in all of this; at the age of eleven he had sold his first bag of shrooms. However, his family was a broken home. His father had been killed in a drive-by shooting when he was only five, and his mother had been diagnosed with Osteosis (a form of joint paralysis) disabling her ability to work when he was fifteen. This forced Rose to turn his drug dealing hobby into a job. His rise to the top was a dirty one, even for a drug dealer. Double crossed deals, unsolved murders, and police informants all helped him gather enough influence to become the Kingpin that he was leading up to his arrest. He would employ many maneuvers to make the most profit possible. But he made a crucial mistake that dealers know never to make: he got addicted to his own product. After he got addicted to coke, it all went downhill from there. His addiction spiraled out of control until eventually he got caught in public high out of his mind. One thing led to another and the police officers on duty realized he was the highly wanted Jack Rose -- Kingpin of the Iron Jungle. [/quote] Accepted. [quote=@Silver Fox] This is quite the nice full rp. But I'll ask if I'm allowed to join anyhow xD [/quote] Sorry, think I'm gonna have to close it up. Two other people PM'd me about joining, I accepted one already. I didn't intend for it to get so full, but it took off. Check back later, I might reopen it. As of right now new sheets are closed. [@orichalk] sent in a species a page back and it was accepted, I'll of course allow them to make a character. [@Comic] has a character in work as well, I'l allow them to finish and submit it. I'm working on the IC now, it shall be up soon.