Alright I see what your saying, I can get behind that. Maybe just tweak the backstory a little bit to make him younger and proofread a little more. I think it'll be interesting to see what you do with him so yeah just tinker a little and I think you should be fine.

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I'm planning on getting this all started in the IC on Saturday so just a heads up for everyone. No rush on anyone with an incomplete character sheet though. Any accepted characters will be able to post in the IC after I get the IC OP up on Saturday. This is just a heads up so people can start planning and writing their opening posts.