[@Hella Cute] I'm glad that the adjectives make more sense now, I appreciate the feedback. 

Yeah , I took the family factor into consideration. I sorta hinted at complications when he didn't dig into his father's death just in case it endangers his little sister. Adding that part about his dad stemmed from an idea I could use in the future for this story depending on how things go. And about his income, I'm sure he isn't the type to spend lavishly to the point that she'd notice something was up.

His sister is 16 so she doesn't need to be babied. I should probably clarify that in the CS. Thanks!