Well I got stood up, so I'll have a look at the feedback now.

Awee :c that's horrid. I'm sowwy fwiend. ~Alice

I'll see what I can about doing them within the half hour since I'm about to log off and help make dinner. Sorry you got stood up, that's really shitty. *awkward hug*

@NeoAC Oh shit... are you ok? Well, at least we all know the movie was bomb right?! shot// Kingsmen Trailer: http://youtu.be/kl8F-8tR8to

So I've done all the feedback I think? It's all on the first page with the rest, if anyone has any further questions or issues, best let me know soon since I'd like to finish my own sheet, and get the IC post up within the next couple of days (when my essays are out of the way).

Oh no, that's awful. D: Really sorry, bro

@Genkai Yeah I got mine edited. Just waiting for more tweaking or approval. Its on pg 6

It's good to go.

@Genkai Alrighty, awesomesauce. I'll move it ;)

Alright, I'll make the last adjustments to mine for the approval of the boss. EDIT: Updated, he stays as his Ghost Rider form but he can only summon his bike in dire situations.

Woo, good to hear I'm In the clear. I wish I could assuage your worries a bit more but all I can say is that you'll have to trust me not to be a huge bastard to everybody. Either way, it's time for the hype. You're on the homestretch, Genkai-sama, this majestic bird is almost ready to take flight~

Thanks for the support all. I was just feeling really depressed the entire drive back and hopefully, I've slept it all out of my system now. And I'll have to see Kingsman another time. I was waiting for her for so long they stopped selling tickets for it. Anyway, moving onto the feedback: @Genkai Yeah, I figured a story like that probably was asking too much. Honestly, I was just trying to get something down before I went off to work that night, but I know it was not my best work. Correctors do stand out among the DgtWld population right? Like if called into action in front of a...well let's say a normie, they can be seen right? I can flip it where he has an encounter with a Corrector early on, possibly getting assaulted by a virus or something, and that offers some sort of inspiration to try and make it into the Corrector ranks. Then he gets chosen on merit as opposed to for redemption. If you don't like the Corrector hazing angle either, I figure with the previous angle it would be a Corrector who has since retired anyway, so I can make the change a tribute instead.

I watched yesterday Paddington, nice movie just right to relax. But I still dont like that he looks thinner and less cuddly than in my memories. I will see to watch another time when I have free time Kingsman, too. *steals one of those rumored chocolate cookies, jumping on the hype train*

this a new rp? O.o did the old rp we were about to do get shut down? XD

Just got back from watching Kingsmen. I must say, one of the spy movies of all time... So damn good ⊙▽⊙

@Anonymous Glad you liked it. Supposedly a sequel may be able to bring back a certain someone (no spoilers) which I would be so happy with. XD @The_written_John Which...? @TalijaKey I was iffy on that film but I've heard people were surprised and enjoyed it, I may have to catch it on Redbox sometime. @NeoAC Hopefully you're feeling better now. *hugs* We may be misunderstanding each other, if that's the case we should figure out where that is. ^^; Online, normal people aren't "physically" immersed in the DgtWld like Correctors. Normal people can use it to take their minds to other places but Correctors can take their physical body with them so say, if they get cut in a battle, they get cut in real life. So normal people and Correctors would not cross paths online since they're using two different means of access. Correctors get taken to a more stripped DgtWld with think "tron grids" where as other people could go to say tropical islands or cities or shops, etc. So Correctors can't really reach out to normal people or interact with them, Correctors interact with hackers and their viruses they create. Normal people on the other hand, have a much more watered down experience. So a possible way your character could come in contact would be the simple way outlined in my first post of the OOC, I know some people have opt'ed to have complex ways of being recruited but they are really unique and not really that frequent I'm afraid, and we're trying to tone down the amount of characters who have had questionable upbringings, etc. Too much and it makes us worry we're creating something less than believable in this world...if that make sense? @Krauxis Oh I trust you, it's just presenting stuff can always be misinterpreted. ^^; @TheMusketMan It still doesn't look like you gave specifics about the ammo he can reload with. If you're hellbent on keeping the bike, even for occasional use, I would still strongly say the flaming face would need to go or one of his guns would. It still seems like too much junk for him to have...

@Genkai OK yeah, I think that's where I was losing it, I didn't know if Correctors had any kind of interaction with normal users or not, so that does clear up a lot for me. I think I'm just going to have Maya be a patron of the DgtWld who focused on studying in the real world as opposed to the linked stuff I had in there before. Actually earn the spot and all. I'll keep the last paragraph as is though for now, and I'll make the changes tomorrow once I get back from my friend's house/work/sleep, likely in that order.

Okay, just let me know when you've got things tweaked and I'll check it out when I can. Today I have to get at least one essay done and maybe another started...then I need a group post for a lovely group that's been waiting for some time. >__>' And my sheets here too.

I'm still kind if confused. So normal users control avatars where their minds are ported in, like full-dive immersion and explore the world that's designed to interacted by them and regular users can interact with other regular users, right? But correctors go deeper than the rendering that normal users experience and are also physically present in the DgtWld, right? Even though they can change their look like it was an avatar?

I'd like clarification on ^all this too. Who can see who? Expansion on the DgtWld and its limitations etc.?