[quote=@I-Am-X]With the text that comes after the 1st flashback wraps up, where do I make his 'correction'? The beginning part of the post and assume the following text follows after the revision?[/quote]
Everything past the third-years being dickbutts is "wrong". I guess for the actual revision, Akira'd tell Mika whilr Rokoru's off grabbing something, and the flashback would be the revision?