Okay, um...

@McFazzer: The only issue I'm really seeing is that some of the mechanics for Dance Battle seem a little easy to abuse. While this is meant to be over-the-top I don't want to inadvertently allow anything that could be godmoddy through.

The other note is less major, it's just that Japanese High School starts at 15-16, not fourteen. ^^;

@Dead Cruiser: Okay, um... while I think it would be easy to make this acceptable, since the main idea isn't really overlapping so much, the way she's currently written overlaps since she's basically written to be the super-rich character when that was already being worked on. ^^;

Not that she can't be rich, but there's still overlap with how she's currently set up.

That and you didn't really talk to Rin at all about how to avoid this.