[quote=@Prince of Seraphs] Could you define "super-subjective-ism" for me. I tried looking it up but all the definitions I found didn't seem to fit with any aspect of storytelling. Also just in general as a story what did you think of it? Yeah, Abel's thing was that he was essentially the Fred and George Weasly of Beacon. In the first draft there was a prank he pulled in Combat Class and just in general enough interaction to make that clear. Also if [@KabenSaal] is interested Mokuren was for lack of a better way to put it like Priscilla except much more of a girly girl. She was also one of Shiro's three girlfriends (the others being Sangue and Diamond). Oh and [@paigesweetheart] Priscilla was a by the book hardass sergeant and Goodwitch's right hand. Amy got dishonorably discharged and promptly imprisoned when it was discovered she was a Vacuo spy. [/quote] Ah neat. I suspected you might say something about that. The term I just used to define my own personal inclinations as a judge; others might not agree with them, but they're welcome to make the contests. As a story, your entry was great. If you like, you can add back in the stuff my constraints made you delete, post it on this thread, and I'll read it and enjoy it then too. That's another thing, actually. Since the OOC isn't moving a mile a minute any more, I feel like we can open up on another subject area that I wanted to eventually include: the posting of things we've written to get critiques from other people. Praise and constructive criticism might be rewarded by various readers, anywhere from a couple of words to a couple of paragraphs, and we'd be able to grow as writers. This stuff would most certainly not be necessarily RWBY-based. Is anyone else in favor of such an idea?